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SPCA Visit

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to day we got a visit from a SPCA member
she talked about how they get the animals
and why they need a home.                                                                                                   

if i had a got a pet it would be this one from the SPCA (ellie)

Gavin Bishop's Visit!!

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Today we had a visit from the one and only Gavin Bishop!!

He talked to us about his books and why reading is one of
the most important things. He wrights and illustrates his own
books. he is amazing.

My story

My Story

Once there were four dragons. There was the black dragon With oily eyes, the yellow dragon that was brighter than the sun, the  long dragon that was as sneaky as a snake and the pearl dragon that was polished like a pearl. The dragons lived in a very salty sea. There was a very dry village nearby the ground was as dry as a dead tree trunk. The emperor controlled the rain, and he did not make it rain very often. The people in the village needed it to rain because there crops needed to grow and if the crops didn't grow there would be no food and the village would go hungry. The dragons were talking ¨we need to do something¨  they said.

So they went to the emperors palace on the clouds and asked  and asked for him to make it rain ¨yeah yeah i'll do it later¨he said. So the days went past the people were eating clay and grass and it still hadn't rained so the dragons decided to do something about it. They went down to the salty sea and started to scoop up the salt wate…

First Draft

My goal is: Avoid run-on sentences.                                First draft 
Once there were four dragons. There was the Black Dragon, Yellow Dragon, Long Dragon and the Pearl Dragon. The dragons lived in the sea there was a village near by. The emperor controlled the rain, and he did not make it rain very often. The people in the village needed it to rain because there crops needed to grow and if the crops didn't grow there would be no food and the village would go hungry. The dragons were talking ¨we need to do something¨  they said.
So they went to the emperor and asked for him to make it rain ¨yeah yeah i'll do it later¨he said. So the days went past the people were eating clay and grass and it still hadn't rained so the dragons decided to do something. They went down to the sea and started to pick up sea water in their mouths and spray it on the village to make rain.
After that they were called to see the emperor as they entered the emperor started yelling at them fo…

Four Dragons Descriptive Writing

Plot Matrix

Plot Matrix: The Four Dragons
Who
Black Dragon Yellow Dragon Long Dragon Pearl Dragon Emperor Villages Where

             China


What Problem

       No Rain Setback

Emperor won't  help



Setback


When the dragons help they Get stuck under the mountains

Helper


Dragons help themselves Solution
Spitting water into the air


Ending

Dragons turn into rivers Learning


Even if you are risking your life It still feels good